Introduction
Academic and standardized assessments are moving away from
personal response essay prompts toward a more integrative approach
requiring students to read one or more texts and respond appropriately
in writing. The texts may be quantitative (charts, graphs, or other
visuals) or issues-based (controversial topics, current events, and so
on). Such assessments require a set of skills that go far beyond mere
grammatical accuracy and felicitous word choice, skills normally taught
to American students in language arts rather than in foreign language
classes. Many ESL students coming from traditional educational
backgrounds in which texts are to be memorized or imitated need careful
preparation in both the careful reading and analysis of texts and the
production of an appropriately academic written text of their own.
Following basic reading instruction models, a combination
top-down (going from the "big picture" of meaning) and bottom-up
(analyzing how authors convey meaning with grammatical structures,
figurative language, and register) approach appears to work best in
facilitating students' analysis of texts, the necessary first step in
the production of an appropriate written response. The following
easy-to-follow assignment types have been used successfully to assist
students in handling these higher-level integrated
assessments.
Activities and Guidelines
Dialectical Journal
The dialectical journal requires students to respond in writing
to a self-chosen idea from an assigned text, which is usually lengthy
(e.g., a book—fiction or nonfiction—or a long short story or article),
to be read outside of class. Students dig deeper into the text by
carefully reflecting on and analyzing the author’s ideas.
After informing students that this assignment is a reaction to,
not a summary of, ideas in the assigned readings, have them do the
following:
- Select at least four ideas that interest them from the assigned reading (chapters, story, article).
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Divide their paper in half vertically (either folding the
page, drawing a line down the center, or typing their entries in two
columns).
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On the left side of the page, write down the passage they
choose from the book, noting page numbers, enclosing the excerpt in
quotes, and using an ellipsis (…) if the passage is long.
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On the right side of the page, write their reaction to each
passage. They might write about why they chose a particular passage, how
the passage affects them, how it relates to their own experience or to
the “real” world, or why the passage is important (frustrating,
confusing, inspiring). Their responses should demonstrate that they have
thought carefully about and comprehend what they have read.
Reaction Essay
The dialectical journal serves as a springboard for a more
sophisticated assignment, a formal reaction essay, in which the student
responds to the arguments presented by one or more authors, agreeing or
disagreeing and explaining why. This analytical essay integrates two or
three of the author's main points, generally with a direct or indirect
quote, with the student's stance in carefully constructed paragraphs
that form a complete analytical essay.
Remind students that a reaction paper is not a summary or basic
argument essay but rather a point-by-point analysis of the author’s
thesis and arguments. Students are expected to evaluate the author’s
central claim/point/argument, the underlying assumptions, and the
supporting evidence.
For a single text/author: Students read the article carefully,
identify the author’s thesis/main idea and supporting arguments, and
select ideas to paraphrase or quote in their essay. They then draft
their essay using the following format:
- Introduction should properly cite the author (with
appositive) and source, as well as include a brief summary of the
overall thesis and key points to be analyzed (context of the argument).
The students’ thesis should state their overall opinion about the
author’s main point.
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Each body paragraph should begin with a topic sentence that
addresses a main point from the article (with a paraphrase or quote),
followed by the student’s statement of agreement or disagreement with
that idea. Body paragraphs must also include discussion/analysis of the
validity of the author’s point with adequate support (facts, expert
opinion, examples).
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The concluding paragraph should include students’ overall
conclusion (overall opinion) about the author’s argument and a final
comment (prediction, solution, recommendation, warning, insightful
question).
Comparative Reading Analysis
For more than one text/author, take the reaction essay a step further:
- Ask students to read two thematically-related articles and
examine where the arguments overlap and differ. Students analyze how the
authors address different aspects of the same issue.
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Ask students to evaluate the strengths and weaknesses of
each argument as well as the purpose, intended audience and tone of the
articles.
Reverse Outline
Reverse outlining requires students to examine how a writer
constructs an essay (someone else’s or their own). This activity can be
used in a variety of ways, including to examine how successful writers
effectively develop and support their ideas and to assess the weaknesses
and strengths of their own essays.
When reverse outlining the essay, students should consider the following:
1. Introductory paragraph
- What kind of “attention getter” does the writer use to interest the reader?
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What context/background information is provided for the issue?
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What is the writer's thesis?
2. Body paragraphs (complete for each body paragraph)
- Topic sentence: What is the paragraph’s main idea?
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Supporting points: What points (comments or claims) does the writer make about that idea?
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Evidence: What evidence does the writer provide as support?
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Analysis: How does the writer analyze that evidence? Does the
writer address and refute the counterargument?
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Concluding sentence: How does the writer end the paragraph and tie the ideas together?
3. Concluding paragraph
- What is the writer’s conclusion about the thesis?
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What final comment about the issue does the writer make?
Rhetorical Précis
Writing a rhetorical précis (abstract summary) helps students
develop their critical reading skills. This type of summary requires
students to summarize the writer’s argument concisely and to describe
the rhetorical aspects of the text accurately as follows:
- Identify the author, the name and genre of text, and the central claim/thesis.
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Explain how the author develops and supports the argument.
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State the author's purpose (motive).
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Identify the intended audience and characterize how the author relates to that audience.
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Describe the author’s tone (word choice reflects tone: serious, informal, humorous).
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Explain the significance of the text.
Statistical Paragraph
Statistical writing requires students to turn a graph, chart,
or other statistical information into clear, accurate prose. Having
students draft their statistical paragraphs as follows makes turning
numbers into prose much easier:
- Survey the statistics for trends or patterns.
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Decide on a main point for the paragraph that reflects that trend or pattern.
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Write a topic sentence, citing the source for the statistics and explaining the main point.
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Include the key statistics that support the main point.
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Write statistical statements supporting that point and
organize them in logical order(i.e. highest to lowest or most important
to least important).
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Draw a conclusion clearly supported by the statistics.
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Make an inference, a recommendation, a prediction, or other
concluding thought, ensuring the statistics support that idea.
Structure Search
This activity (done individually or in pair/small groups)
requires students—using one of their assigned readings—to search for,
identify, and analyze various grammatical structures. Besides providing
useful grammar review, this activity increases awareness of how an
effective writer’s style and syntactic choices affect the reader. Often
ESL students write choppy, awkward, wordy, stringy, ungrammatical
sentences. By examining well-written texts, they learn how to write
clear, detailed, varied sentences using modification and subordination.
Have the students do the following:
1. Highlight and label the following structures in the reading:
- Verbal phrases: participial (-ing,
-en/ed), gerund,
infinitive
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Prepositional phrases; (adjective and adverb)
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Appositive phrases
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Adverbial clauses
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Adjective clauses (restrictive and nonrestrictive)
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Noun clauses
2. Search for and highlight one example for each of the following sentence types:
- Simple
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Compound (rare!)
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Complex
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Compound-complex
3. How does the writer begin sentences? (Subject?)
4. Does the author use a lot of short sentences? Explain.
Rhetorical and Literary Devices Search
This activity requires students to examine how an author uses
rhetorical and literary devices to convey meaning and helps them to
become more proficient readers and writers. Using a list of literary
devices (e.g., metaphor, simile, hyperbole) as a guide, students
(individually or in pairs/groups) search for and highlight examples of
each device in the assigned text and explain the purpose of each. This
activity can also be done on a worksheet, on which students write their
example sentences and explanations followed by a paraphrase without the
device so that they can discover how these devices enrich
meaning.
Conclusion
Clearly, these activities illustrate for students the very real
connection between reading and writing. By building their language and
analytical skills, we can provide students with the tools they need to
handle the complex demands of academic assessment and prepare them for
their future college coursework.
Karen
Fox has held both
teaching and administration positions in the ESL field for many years.
She has a master’s degree in both linguistics and education and has
presented at various CATESOL and TESOL conferences.
Rosemary
Hiruma has extensive experience teaching
academic ESL, especially composition courses. She has a master’s degree
in linguistics with an emphasis in second language acquisition. She has
coauthored articles and presented at various CATESOL and TESOL
conferences.
Barbara
Jonckheere has been teaching in the academic
ESL field for many years. She has a master’s degree in applied
linguistics and has presented at various CATESOL and TESOL conferences
and published articles about academic writing
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