Some people support _______ by claiming that ________. In their
opinion, _______________. In addition, ______________________.
Meanwhile, there are some people who __________________. Their reasons
are different, sometimes for __________, sometimes for
__________________, sometimes simply for ____________________.
Personally, my attitude for this matter is positive. Firstly,
____________. Moreover, _______________. Lastly,
________________________. Therefore, __________.
Sound familiar? This is part of a template EFL Chinese students
are given in a test preparation class. Each year, thousands of Chinese
students are taking TOEFL, IELTS, or SAT in order to pursue their study
overseas. The majority of the students are steered toward test prep
courses, in which they learn how to write to the test. In many test prep
courses, template teaching becomes the core content of teaching.
Material writers or teachers categorize the writing prompts of the
authentic tests or sample tests and provide templates for each type of
writing prompt, such as templates for problem-solving essays, templates
for argumentation essays, and templates for compare-and-contrast essays.
Class time is largely devoted to showing model essays of each
type, analyzing how the questions in the actual tests are framed, and
categorizing the writing tasks into template types. Students are working
hard to familiarize themselves with different writing prompts and to
memorize the templates, with the hope that they can recognize the
writing task type and swiftly retrieve the corresponding template in the
test situation. Some test prep courses even proudly claim to have
developed an all-purpose template ready for students to use for any
writing topics the students may encounter in the tests.
Templates are tempting, as they are easy to teach and to learn.
Teachers just provide different templates for students to memorize.
Learning objectives and outcomes are clearer than they would be if
teaching intangible critical thinking skills in writing. Students just
need to memorize the template and fill in the blanks with the content of
the writing prompts. For students who want to compile a 250-word or
300-word essay within the test time constraints, the template is a tool
for a quick start and a helpful crutch. Though this template approach
may get students to pass the test, does it teach students to write well?
Does it fulfill the very goals that those writing tests are designed to
achieve and assess?
An essential goal of the TOEFL or IELTS writing test is to
assess prospective students’ ability to write in standard academic
English. The tests are designed to prepare and introduce the students to
the nature of academic writing in the universities in English-speaking
countries. Learning writing by merely filling in templates actually
sabotages the goals of these tests. Students trained in this way will
bring their conceptualization of writing as mechanical learning of
structures and vocabulary to the universities where writing is
conceptualized as a tool of thinking and articulation of one’s complex
ideas. Without any template to rely on, these students will find it
challenging to handle academic writing tasks. The effect of template
learning is hard to reverse when students think this is the way to learn writing. Students’ experience in
writing for tests may actually turn out to be an obstacle for their
later study overseas.
Helping students
understand the preferred structure of academic writing is important in
preparing students for TOEFL or IELTS writing tests. However, there are
more creative ways to achieve this objective than focusing merely on
teaching templates. Preparing students for a test should involve
identifying the challenges of the test and preparing students for such
challenges, not creating standardized students who are controlled to
write for the test.
To rise to the challenges of TOEFL or IELTS academic writing
tasks, students need two sets of skills: language skills and academic
skills. Test-takers are expected to demonstrate their language skills in
their use of grammar, vocabulary, sentence structure, punctuation, and
spelling in writing. Probably equally important, if not more, they are
expected to show their academic skills in analyzing a situation,
synthesizing information, evaluating an opinion, organizing their
thoughts, and presenting their thoughts clearly. A good test prep course
needs to address those skills.
The specific teaching activities to target the skills may vary
from one situation to another, but two essential teaching practices that
would benefit students are taking students through the process of
thinking and writing, and providing feedback on students’ writing. When
analyzing a writing task, it is important for students to know the task
type, but that is not the end. Teachers may raise questions or utilize
mind mapping that would help students to think critically on a given
topic. Instead of just showing models and templates, teachers may model
the thinking process for students and show how planning, writing, and
reviewing take shape. Showing students a loaf of bread cannot guarantee
that they know how to make one on their own; showing the process will
help. In terms of giving feedback, this would enable students to see
their strengths and weaknesses in language skills and academic skills,
motivate them to revise their understanding of the test tasks, and help
them understand why sometimes they follow the recipe but still fail to
make a delicious loaf of bread.
By moving beyond the tempting templates, a good writing prep
course can not only help students perform well on the tests but also
serve as a bridge that connects EFL students’ past experience in
learning general English to the expected learning of academic English in
the near future.
Ming Fang is a doctoral candidate in the Foreign and
Second Language Education program at The Ohio State University. Her
research interests include second language writing, world Englishes, and
nonnative teacher professional development. |