The CET (College English Test) is carried out twice a year
in mainland Chinese universities. Unfortunately, this testing system has
been exerting increasingly adverse influences on English learning. Take
writing, for instance. Since the end of 1980s when the CET was first
conducted nationally, writing has long been a weak point. It is often
the case that students in mainland China make very little progress in
English writing no matter how many writing tasks they have completed, no
matter how many mistakes in their writing have been corrected, and even
no matter how many sample writings they have recited. One reason is
that the controlled writing format in the CET, which deals with writing a
three-paragraph essay based on three topic sentences written in
Chinese, greatly hinders teachers from trying new approaches to writing
instruction, and at the same time, it makes students feel more bored
than interested. Another contributing factor, we believe, is that most
university students are lacking linguistic information in their
long-term memory, which substantially decides their output in
writing.
This article proposes a computer-assisted strategy called
“Listen to Write” which draws on the principles of auditory memory to
improve mainland Chinese EFL college writing. Traditionally, more
emphasis is laid on visual memory than on auditory memory in language
learning. But, when it comes to improving writing ability, we would like
to suggest that priority should be given to listening to reinforce
long-term memory for writing. In addition, because we are living in an
information age when CALL (computer-assisted language learning) is being
adopted in various ways, our strategy also depends on computer
technology. Thus, in this article, we recommend some techniques and
activities on how to teach writing effectively and efficiently using
auditory memory and computer technology.
AN OVERVIEW OF MEMORY TERMINOLOGY
Memory can be understood as an organism's ability to store,
retain, and recall information. In the eyes of psychologists, memory
comprises sensory memory, short-term memory, and long-term memory in
terms of its span (Shichun, 2000). Sensory memory is the ability to
retain impressions of sensory information, both visual and auditory,
after the original stimulus has ceased. It is considered to operate
within the approximate time frame of under 1 second (and no more than
1), and so it is very short-lived. What is caught by sensory memory is a
fleeting copy of the original visual information (e.g., color, shape,
size, image, text) or auditory information (e.g., voice, tone, speed,
rhythm). Short-term memory (also called “primary” or “active memory”) is
the capacity for holding a small amount of information actively in the
mind in a readily available state for a short period of time that
usually lasts 10-15 seconds without rehearsal of the material. Long-term
memory is memory that can last as little as a few days or as long as
decades. It differs structurally and functionally from working memory or
short-term memory, which ostensibly stores items for only around 18
seconds (Peterson & Peterson, 1959). Long-term memory also
encodes information semantically for storage (Baddeley, 1966). It can
store information for as long as a lifetime.
THE CONNECTION BETWEEN LISTENING AND WRITING
Language skills are often categorized as receptive or
productive (Nunan, 2003). Speaking and writing are productive skills.
Listening and reading are receptive skills. However, in terms of
comprehension, listening is an active, purposeful process of making
sense of what is heard. While listening, people not only process what
they hear but also connect it to other information they already know. As
Buck (1995) pointed out, the assumption that listeners simply decode
messages is mistaken: “Meaning is not in the text (text = whatever is
being listened to)―but is something that is constructed by listeners
based on a number of different knowledge sources.” Listening contributes
not only to comprehension but also to memory, or rather auditory
sensory memory. With regard to writing, it is both a physical and a
mental act. Its purpose is both to express and impress. It is both a
process and a product. While a person is writing, information is being
actively taken out and purposefully processed in the form of memory. To
be exact, writing depends much more on long-term memory than on
short-term memory.
Metaphorically speaking, memory serves as a bridge between
receptive and productive language skills. Traditionally, reading is
accepted as the main supporting skill for writing, and listening as the
main supporting skill for speaking. But actually, listening reinforces
memory and, therefore, it does indeed support writing. The important
role of auditory memory takes shape in infancy, and so it plays a
long-term role in language development over the course of a lifetime.
Moreover, auditory information may be retained more efficiently in
long-term memory than visual information (Shichun, 2000). We do not mean
to suggest that visual activities are less important in language input
than auditory ones, but rather that it is practical to give preference
to auditory input in language learning while attaching necessary
importance to visual input. Thus, in writing education, listening may be
a more suitable supporting skill (at least for some learners) than
reading.
HOW CALL SUPPORTS LISTENING AND WRITING
Since its emergence, CALL has had a symbiotic relationship with
technology and pedagogy. CALL emphasizes student-centered lessons that
allow learners to learn independently using structured and/or
unstructured interactive exercises. CALL is not a method but rather a
tool that teachers can use to facilitate language-learning processes.
CALL can be used to introduce new information, reinforce classroom
learning, or provide additional practice for remediation.
The Listen-to-Write approach uses computer technology to
maximize the benefits of listening for application in writing education.
More specifically, it uses editing software, the Internet, and language
labs. Each of these tools is described below, and these descriptions
are followed by a sample text that is used in instruction along with a
sample teaching procedure.
CALL Tools: Sound Editing Software
We use sound editing software such as Audacity and CoolEdit to
enhance the effect of memorizing what is needed for writing. A tape
recorder is a traditional means to practice listening. It is not easy to
use a tape recorder to replay the exact language units, but with the
help of computer software for sound editing, words, expressions,
sentences, and paragraphs can be played accurately. This is helpful in
reducing “listening redundancy” (an invented term), lessening confusion
and thus guaranteeing the quality of memorization.
CALL Tools: The Internet
We use the Internet as a source of contemporary listening
materials. Students may be assigned to collect from the Internet good
and appropriate language units about a topic to be discussed or
practiced for writing next time, such as “Money and Happiness.” It is
better when the materials from the Internet are in the form of sound
(mp3 is the best). Also, the Internet can be used as a platform for
checking homework or testing students’ writing ability.
CALL Tools: Language Lab
We use language labs to guarantee the quality of listening and
the effect of teaching. In mainland China, large amounts of money are
invested in building language labs for listening, speaking, self-study,
and testing, most of which are advanced enough to guarantee the quality
of listening and the effects of teaching.
CALL Tools: A Sample Text and Teaching Procedure
Listen-to-write CALL activities can be carried out either
inside the classroom or outside the classroom in either top-down or
bottom-up ways. For a partial illustration (please note that more
detailed descriptions of activities are provided in sections below), see
the following sample text that we use:
Example 1
Stress directly affects digestion. However, the extent of the
consequence depends a lot on the individual’s reaction to the cause. For
example: two female employees are censured by the manageress. The
stomach of one may feel as if it is being used as a backdrop for the
filming of the final part of “The Towering Inferno”, while the other may
experience a first-time flight down an Alpine slope. The first girl is
angry. In her fury her stomach chums wildly with an increase in acid
build-up. In contrast, the frightened girl’s stomach grinds to a halt,
with nausea growing in intensity. (Choy & Chew, 1987)
The paragraph in Example 1 was selected from a book on writing.
To guarantee the authenticity of listening, we recorded it as a mp3
file (e.g., “Stress directly affects digestion.mp3”) using a native
English speaker.
Before listening to “Stress directly affects digestion.mp3”
intensively, students are required to answer questions that build
background information, such as: What does stress mean? How can
an author present an example in writing? How can an author create
contrast in writing? Then, the teacher may play some mp3 files
in which some information is connected with these questions.
Alternatively, the teacher may ask students to surf the Internet and
listen to materials that are related to “stress” or “digestion.” These
background-building activities may help students predict what is in the
text and better understand the organization and development of the
paragraph when it is played.
After students listen to “Stress directly affects
digestion.mp3,” the goal is to help students become familiar with the
given writing sample, and so we use “intensive explanation.” By this we
mean that we explain the paragraph from vocabulary to sentence patterns
and then from discourse organization to idea development. The intensive
explanation is intended to support listening and the conversion of
information from sensory memory to long-term memory.
In addition, students listen to the file intensively as
homework until they can write down more than 90 percent of the
paragraph. What is written down individually is to be handed in, graded,
and, most important, corrected with its transcript. After all mistakes
have been corrected, students will know what their weak points are.
Also, the repetition of listening to the same file stimulates retention
of the information in the paragraph in long-term memory.
AN OVERVIEW OF THE LISTEN-TO-WRITE APPROACH
The listen-to-write approach aims at improving college writing
skills by means of staged (i.e., graded, graduated, or scaffolded) and
repeated listening to selected language information for writing. This
approach advocates listening as an effective way to present input for
writing, while never denying or doubting the importance of visual input
for writing. By staged, we mean that listening
exercises start at a “low” level (e.g., words, phrases) and progress to a
“higher” level (e.g., sentences, paragraphs) to ensure the effect of
teaching through step-by-step practice. By repeated,
we mean that what has been practiced shall be practiced again at weekly
or monthly intervals to ensure the quality of long-term memory. By selected, we mean that the auditory information
included in the listen-to-write approach focuses on language input that
is conventionally used in college writing in China at a comparatively
general level, excluding language that is not typically used. For
example, the synonyms of cause such as arouse, generate, and produce are often used in college writing in China
and quite familiar to students, but trigger, ignite, and fuel are not
necessarily so, and so such words would be selected for advanced writing
practice, not for a general level of writing proficiency.
Listen-to-Write Approach: Equipment and Materials
Listen-to-write is recommended to be conducted in a language
lab. Teachers should make full use of listening equipment. It is not
recommended to use too many PowerPoints (PPTs) to present or illustrate
information, for this visual activity may lead to distraction. Also, the
goal of listen-to-write is to concentrate on listening and repeated
listening. To do this, the teacher uses both paper materials and sound
materials. All materials may be designed for in-class activities and for
out-of-class homework.
Listen-to-Write Approach: Timeline
The whole listen-to-write program should be divided into three
levels: elementary, intermediate, and advanced. In mainland China, the
three stages may be finished in one or two semesters, each semester
having 16 weeks. Activities in each lesson are based on a task, and they
start and end in a sequenced pattern according to the specific
theory-driven techniques (i.e., bottom-up, top-down, or
interactive).
Listen-to-Write Approach: Types of Activities
“Intensive listening” is often used as a bottom-up activity for
homework. Students are given an mp3 writing file (usually a good
writing example on a heated topic), and they are asked to write down all
the words precisely from the file by listening to the file again and
again. “Gap-filling” is another bottom-up activity, and
“listen-and-guess” and dictation are two of the top-down activities.
These activities are described more thoroughly and illustrated in the
next section.
ACTIVITIES FOR THE LISTEN-TO-WRITE APPROACH
In the listen-to-write approach, both bottom-up activities and
top-down activities are used as the primary learning activities, and
these are supplemented with interactive activities (incidentally, these
overlap bottom-up and top-down techniques). The sections below provide
descriptions and some examples of activities.
Listen-to-Write: Bottom-Up Activities
Intensive Listening (Bottom-Up)
This bottom-up activity, which is often used in the
listen-to-write approach, focuses on linguistic details needed in
writing. Students are asked to read aloud after the speaker and write
down exactly what is heard. This activity may appear to be dictation,
but it differs in an important way. What is important here is that the
listeners read aloud after the speaker to provide writing input
information in the form of sounds. In some sense, the louder, the
better, to strongly impress the listeners with what is needed in
writing.
The materials shall be selected to meet the needs of writing,
usually at three linguistic levels: word, phrase, and sentence. The
materials may be recorded as auditory files by human native speakers or
by nonhuman software programs (even better than human voice). Here are
some examples.
Example 2
(a) Word: nowadays, recently, moreover,
furthermore, unfortunately, conversely, controversial, disputable,
essential, perspective, aspect, viewpoint, illusion, fallacy, involve,
argue, assert, generate
(b) Phrase: in my opinion, after all, in
some way, worst of all, on the contrary, increasing numbers of, a great
many, varieties of, contribute to, lead to, give rise to, arise from,
stem from, depend on, rely on, focus on, from the perspective of,
because of, on account of
(c) Sentence: focusing on coordination and
subordination (SV stands for a complete sentence.)
Coordination:
SV and SV.
SV, but SV.
SV, or SV.
SV, so SV.
Subordination:
SV if SV.
SV because SV.
SV although SV.
It is worth mentioning that this activity can be designed as
a task-based one. The words, phrases, and sentences are all from the
same writing sample. The speaker may break the order of the sentences in
the original sample writing and the listeners, having written down all
the sentences, are asked to reorder those sentences to form a writing
and check it with the original.
Gap Filling (Bottom-Up, or Interactive With Top-Down)
This is another bottom-up activity. The materials selected
shall be a good writing sample (which is recorded), and gaps to be
filled include connectives (e.g., conversely, as a result, after all, what’s more, in a word),
often-used writing expressions (e.g., contribute to, arise from, take effective
measures), and any recommendable writing expressions (e.g., just as a coin has two sides, it goes
without saying that, it is interpreted to mean
that).
This activity can be conducted in an interactive way. Before
filling the gaps, the listeners are asked to guess, from the perspective
of writing, what is appropriate for the gap. The more brainstorming,
the better. Play the recording of the writing, and then ask the
listeners to check their work.
Listen-to-Write: Top-Down Activities
Listen-and-Guess (Top-Down)
This top-down activity is used in the listen-to-write approach.
This activity focuses on how to write and targets those who have
already had a good understanding of sentence patterns, of the ways to
develop a paragraph (exemplification, cause-effect, etc.), and of the
often-used structures or organizations applied in writing (e.g.,
what-why-how).
Example 3
(a) Play the first half of a sentence: Not until recently
(b) Ask the listeners to guess what sentence pattern it is.
(c) Play the whole sentence: Not until recently have
experts reached a consensus that free music downloads should be
banned.
(d) Ask the listeners to write down exactly the whole sentence.
(e) Play the whole sentences at least three times and ask the listeners to read aloud after the speaker.
Example 4
(a) Play the first sentence of a paragraph (beginning, body, or
ending): In the early days of nuclear power, the United States
made money on it.
(b) Ask the listeners to guess what the paragraph is
like―including the beginning, body, or ending―and give reasons
orally.
(c) Play the whole paragraph: In the early days of
nuclear power, the United States made money on it. But today opponents
have so complicated its development that no nuclear plants have been
ordered or built here in 12 years.
(d) Ask the listeners to guess again. Announce the answer: This
paragraph is most likely to be a beginning paragraph to present a
problem or phenomenon.
(e) Play the whole paragraph and ask the listeners to read aloud after the speaker.
Dictation (Top-Down)
Dictation is adopted to help students memorize all the
important and frequently used vocabulary and sentence patterns. One of
the preparatory jobs to be done is extracting sounds of necessary words,
phrases, or sentences with the help of video-audio editing software
programs, such as Audacity, CoolEdit, and so on. Word examples are affect, extent, consequence, and individual. Phrase examples are for example,
depend on, and in contrast. Sentence
examples may be short or long. Before studying the given material, the
teacher dictates all the extracted linguistic information and then shows
the paragraph for students to check their answers. Finally, all
students are required to read aloud after the recordings repeatedly, to
maximize the effectiveness of memory.
Assessment of Listening and Writing
This section describes the assessment procedures used in the
listen-to-write approach. Basically, assessment includes these four
steps or phases:
Step #1: At the beginning of the listen-to-write course,
students are asked to write a 200-word composition on the topic to be
practiced through the listen-to-write approach.
Step #2: Instructors then build a database for each student, in
which the students’ mistakes made in the composition are recorded and
classified at word, phrase, clause, sentence, and paragraph
levels.
Step #3: During the implementation of the listen-to-write
approach, students are asked to write a composition every 2 weeks.
Instructors should add student mistakes to the individual databases and,
more important, should select and design the listening materials to
help students correct those mistakes consciously and unconsciously. At
the beginning, most mistakes are probably similar to what have been made
previously. Most probably, improvements will emerge week after week.
Meanwhile, students’ databases should include features of their
meritorious performance in using the language, which mirror their
progress in writing.
Step #4: Design a syllabus for each stage, with some quizzes
and a final test attached, and all mistakes in the quizzes and the test
can be added into students’ databases, as new references for seeking and
designing new listening materials.
At the end of the whole course, students are asked to write a
300-word composition. The work is evaluated in detail according to both
discourse organization and linguistic and editorial details. Both merits
and mistakes are recorded in the database. The students’ progress is
evaluated according to what is recorded in their database. Most results
are intended to be encouraging.
CONCLUSION
“Listen to write” is a proposal for a language-learning
approach aimed at improving mainland Chinese EFL college writing. Though
it is true that persistent, repeated, and targeted listening does
improve writing by converting linguistic information to long-term
memory, it cannot be said that listening is versatile in improving
writing. However, listening is an effective way to expand and sustain
memory, and it is through persistence and repetition that information is
converted from auditory sensory memory to short-term memory and in the
end to long-term memory. No matter how advanced computer technology is
used, listening needs patience; persistent and repeated listening needs
far more patience; and therefore, for every mainland Chinese university
student who wants to improve writing in English, “listen to write” is
not only a recommended strategy but a substantial challenge as
well.
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Qingsong (Pine) Gu, pinegu@sues.edu.cn, is a
lecturer at the School of Fundamental Studies, Shanghai University of
Engineering Science, Shanghai, P. R. China. In 2006, he completed his
master’s studies in foreign linguistics and applied linguistics at the
Institute of Foreign Languages, Shanghai Maritime University, Shanghai,
P. R. China. His research interests include linguistics,
language-learning strategy, and translation.
Wenhua (Angela) Chen, angelchenwh1971@yahoo.com.cn,
is a lecturer at the School of Fundamental Studies, Shanghai University
of Engineering Science, Shanghai, P. R. China. She has a master’s
degree from Shanghai International Studies University in the field of
applied linguistics. Her research interests include applied linguistics
and teaching methodology.
Guohua (Tim) Ding, fantastic666@163.com, is
a lecturer at the School of Physical Education, Shanghai University of
Engineering Science, Shanghai, P. R. China. In 2005, he completed his
master’s studies in physical education and sports training at the
Postgraduate Department of Shanghai Institute of Physical Education,
Shanghai, P. R. China. His research interests include bilingual
teaching, sports pedagogy, fitness training methodology, and kinetic
biomechanics. |