ESL writing teachers working in academic settings (e.g.,
high schools, community colleges, universities) seem to voice similar,
recurring concerns: How do I help students reach beyond the basics of
the five-paragraph essay? How can I motivate students to produce enough
work of increasingly higher quality? This article draws on writing
pedagogy to offer a set of teaching strategies and techniques for ESL
academic writing.
Four key concepts serve as a foundation: creativity,
systematicity, operationalization, and validation. First, creativity is
inherent in all humans, and writing teachers can cultivate originality
and artistry in students. Recognizing and stimulating a student’s
artistic side is imperative because it creates pleasure as well as
develops the writer’s voice. In my classroom, I emphasize that to write
well is an art as well as a skill. This emphasis implies that I am
teaching academic ESL writing from the perspective of traditional
academic skills, and also from the perspective of teaching writing as a
creative endeavor. Second, systematicity also promotes good writing. In
teacher development programs, teaching routines are encouraged because
they create security, support development, and potentially encourage
appropriate risk-taking in students. Also, famous authors tend to write
at certain times of the day in certain spaces (George, 2005), so
emerging writers should be encouraged to develop their own routines for
writing. Third, operationalizing the essay or research paper into
specific writing processes makes the work doable. The Chinese have a
saying that “To get through the hardest journey, we need take only one
step at a time, but we must keep on stepping.” Finally, validating an
ESL writer’s work remains crucial to supporting the emotional as well as
academic needs of second-language learners. I have found that emotional
validation parallels supporting the creative nature of my writers. In
this article, I apply these four concepts to ESL academic writing
instruction by means of these six teaching techniques: cultivating
fluency in writing via creativity, teacher modeling of writing
processes, reducing anxiety by breaking down the writing process into
smaller tasks, increasing the accessibility of writing processes via
collaboration, guiding revision, and achieving validity in assessment
through writing portfolios.
CULTIVATING FLUENCY IN WRITING VIA CREATIVITY
Many students, not just ESL writers, are afraid of the writing
process. Consequently, writing teachers and coaches may employ various
types of short, simple writing tasks (e.g., free-writing, in which
students write down whatever comes to mind; brainstorming, in which
students list ideas or details tied to their topic; and drafting, in
which students organize main ideas and supporting details tied to their
purpose or main argument―all of which may be observed but not be graded
by the teacher) that may help students relax and prepare for longer or
more complex writing tasks (which may ask the students to use specific
grammatical, semantic, or stylistic forms previously presented by the
teacher). Also, such exercises may help nervous writers draw on their
creativity, which is associated with left-brain functions (George,
2005). To specifically cultivate creativity, instructors may employ 3-
to 5-minute free-writes that use postcards, images of animals or
scenery, blank cartoons, or other kinds of unusual graphics as visual
writing prompts for warm-up writing tasks. Asking students to write in
response to these images may activate creativity, generate enthusiasm,
and cultivate enjoyment at the beginning of an ESL writing class.
However, to encourage self-awareness and student responsibility in
writing processes, I suggest varying the opening warm-ups between these
creative visual exercises and short quizzes. In my classes, the format
of these quizzes takes the form of timed free-writes, and the content
for the quizzes is self-reflection on writing processes. Examples of
prompts for the quizzes are: What did we talk about yesterday to improve
our writing? What have you learned about your strengths and weaknesses
so far?
TEACHER MODELING OF WRITING PROCESSES
Even at the elementary level, scholars assert that ESL writers
want to observe and experience authentic writing processes (Graves,
1994). Students perceive and personalize authenticity when teachers
model their own writing process. This shows ESL students that all
writers, even native speakers writing in their own language, must revise
their texts. In this way, modeling authenticates the writing process;
using texts generated by the student also serves to help students
witness their own process. However, using student writing as models can
be tricky; the teacher must walk a fine line between the need for
validation and revision. I overcome reluctance about the revision
process by modeling the process, using short excerpts of my own work in
progress. Next, I ask students to attempt their own revisions at
scheduled times during the semester. Finally, I note that participation
in personal and peer revisions also counts as assessment points toward
final grades.
REDUCING ANXIETY BY BREAKING DOWN THE WRITING PROCESS INTO SMALLER TASKS
Anxiety can overtake all kinds of writers, not just ESL
writers. Famous fiction writers have recounted that they build their
stories by writing small sections of the work, sometimes in random
order; this type of nonlinear thinking is well known to creativity
experts (Csikszentmihalyi, 1997). Second-language psychology recommends
breaking down the writing process into smaller tasks that sequentially
represent the writing process and “conscious movement towards goals”
(Oxford, 2001, p. 362; Bialystok, 1990). Because academic writing is a
formidable task, students can benefit by breaking it down into smaller
portions. For example, for a research paper, these portions can be used:
collection of evidence (i.e., research); topic selection and thesis;
outline of main ideas and supporting details; reference page; adding
references in the text (i.e., indirect and direct citations);
introduction; conclusion (i.e., summary plus meta-commentary);
transitions; title page; and formatting guidelines. Each of these
sections can be adjusted to the students’ proficiency. To cultivate
independence in the writing process, I have students submit their papers
with a checklist that is designed to acknowledge that they have
completed all the requirements for each section (see appendix). This coversheet is thoroughly
reviewed during the first week of class and reviewed throughout the
term.
INCREASING THE ACCESSIBILITY OF WRITING PROCESSES VIA COLLABORATION
One way to counteract any negative feelings about revisions is
to ask students to work collaboratively. When two ESL students or a
small group generate or revise texts together, the process becomes
dynamic and collaborative. ESL students may scaffold onto each other’s
writing processes, accept peer revisions, and create texts reflecting a
higher level of academic register (in terms of vocabulary, organization,
correct grammar, and stylistic nuance) together better than they could
alone. In the classroom, setup can be varied to encourage
collaboration. Activities can also be varied from solitary writing
exercises to pair or group activities, with both types of activities
either timed and untimed. In addition, sometimes I create a
scrambled-sentences activity from a text written by a collaborative
pair. First, the class re-sequences the sentences. Then, I divide the
class into small groups, with the collaborating pair of writers
functioning as class consultants for the activity. The class works in small groups to revise and expand upon the text, thereby creating a
new, longer version of the original draft. The consultants circulate
and offer advice, comments, and support to their peers.
GUIDING REVISION
ESL students can help each other with the writing process
during a guided revision activity. A clear set of peer review guidelines
is needed when requesting students to participate in peer-review
activities. Many ESL writing textbooks, such as Oshima and Hogue (2006),
have peer review guidelines in their appendices; the Internet also has a
wide selection as well. As a teacher, I regularly hold mini-conferences
with student writers throughout the semester. Usually, I hold a
conference with a student for 10 to 15 minutes, or I meet with a group
of students who share a similar issue. For example, if a student needs
help paraphrasing or citing references, I will sit with her and listen
carefully as she tells me about a section of her work. Then, we will
look at this section, and I will ask her to point out problem areas.
Sometimes, I will point them out and ask her to revise them with me. My
writer’s conferences are all individualized instruction, yet they are
based on allowing the writer to speak about areas that both the writer
and the teacher feel need revision.
ACHIEVING VALIDITY IN ASSESSMENT THROUGH WRITING PORTFOLIOS
It makes practical sense that writers be assessed by what they
produce. Many creative and rhetorical writing programs in the United
States use portfolio-based assessment for writing courses; research
shows that portfolio assessment can accurately index proficiency and
skill (Huot & O’Neill, 2008). For ESL writers, this alternative
assessment can help relieve stress and anxiety related to exams and
testing. Assessment also directly validates the writer: This is your
work; this is what you have created over time in my class. For example, I
assess my ESL writers not only by how well they write in terms of
content, correct grammar, punctuation, and formatting, but also in terms
of how many times they revise, how many times they meet with a peer
editor, and how many times they meet with me for writer’s conferences.
(For advanced students who need fewer revisions, I ask them to serve as
writing consultants.) In addition, I ask each writer to keep a dialogue
journal, which I assess by weekly word counts. Finally, I assess the
students by the number of essays they bring to completion, which
includes having submitted two drafts.
CONNECTING THE CONCEPTS
Figure 1 illustrates how these concepts and elements are closely related.

Figure 1 visually represents the connections between
validation, systematicity, operationalization, and creativity. Because
these terms are abstract and because the composition of each classroom
is unique in terms of learner identity as well as linguistic fluency,
this figure is an approximation. But as the graph portrays, generally
speaking, validation is most deeply influenced by teacher modeling of
writing processes. Systematicity appears to be most influenced by a
combination of increasing accessibility in the writing process and
through validity in assessment. For operationalization, revision is key.
Finally, creativity is well balanced throughout the six teaching
techniques; I have found that appealing to real-life (culturally
sensitive and culturally known topics and subjects) stimulates the
highest levels of enthusiasm and achievement.
CONCLUSION
I feel that teaching academic writing is an exciting ESL field.
Increasing the accessibility and effectiveness of writing instruction
remains a daunting challenge. This challenge can be overcome if we
consider writing as both a creative process and an academic product. By
incorporating creativity, systematicity, operationalization, and
validation in the ESL classroom and by dividing the academic writing
task into six basic elements, both teachers and students will enjoy the
journey. My writing mentor said to me many times: “Writing is thinking
on paper. You can’t learn rocket science in one day, but you can
eventually master the scientific components if you deconstruct the
process. Take it nice and easy.” Cultivating fluency, segmenting the
writing process into portions, writing together with your students,
alternating production styles, tapping into peer scaffolding as well as
personalized mini-conferences, and finally, choosing portfolio
assessment―all these things may encourage your ESL writers to create
more and better work.
REFERENCES
Bialystok, E. (1990). Communication strategies: A
psychological analysis of second-language use. Oxford, UK:
Blackwell.
Csikszentmihalyi, M. (1997). Creativity: Flow and psychology and the discovery of
invention. New York, NY: Harper Perennial.
George, E. S. (2005). Write away: One novelist’s
approach to fiction. New York, NY: HarperCollins.
Graves, D. (1994). A fresh look at writing. Portsmouth, NH: Heinemann.
Huot, B., & O’Neill, P. (2008). Assessing
writing: A critical sourcebook. New York, NY: Bedford/St
Martin’s.
Oshima, A., & Hogue, A. (2006). Writing
academic English, level four (4th ed.). White Plains, NY:
Pearson Longman.
Oxford, R. L. (2001). Learning styles and strategies. In M.
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Boston, MA: Heinle & Heinle.
Valerie Sartor is an ABD student at the University of
New Mexico. She is interested in bilingual education for minorities and
teaching academic writing to ESL and ELL students. Her dissertation
focuses on Mongolian minority bilinguals in North
China.
APPENDIX
WRITING ASSIGNMENT CHECKLIST FOR ADVANCED WRITING
[Note to reader: I copy this cover sheet for every
typed assignment and staple it to my assignment.]
- I checked my assignment to make sure I used
- complete sentences
- correct spelling
- correct punctuation
- I typed this in Times New Roman 12 point font, double spaced.
- The assignment is on plain white paper printed on one side.
- I used the spell check function to check my spelling.
- The margins are one inch: top, bottom, right, left.
- I wrote this work myself; I did not cut and paste other people’s work.
- The register is academic; I have chosen my words and style carefully.
- My word choice is not casual; the register is academic.
- I do not have in my paper the following: really, very, great, cool, super.
- I varied my sentence length. Short sentences have more power.
- The topic is carefully thought out.
- The introduction has a compelling opener.
- The topic sentence of each paragraph is a clear assertion that serves the thesis.
- The other sentences in the paragraph support the assertion.
- My conclusion does not simply repeat the main argument;
rather, it also summarizes discoveries and explains potential
implications, generalizations, or applications.
- This assignment has the 1,000-word minimum.
- A UNM style cover sheet is attached.
- My paper has a header with my assignment (Draft 1 Argument - Sartor) and page number.
- The title of my paper is creative and informative.
- If applicable: This assignment has quotes and references, specified by the teacher.
SIGNATURE__________________________________
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