I had two degrees before I knew what a thesis statement was,
and I am not sure I have ever consciously written a topic sentence. That
is not to say my papers never had a thesis nor that I write in a stream
of consciousness, but I had never considered the formal features of
what is reductively called “the academic essay” until I had to teach
from a traditional L2 writing textbook. Suddenly, I had to demand a
formulaic structure for every assignment, restrict the number of
paragraphs, and anticipate endless repetition. The results were
mediocre: My weaker students produced dull essays devoid of analysis,
creativity, and voice. My strongest student was driven to tears trying
to fit her complex, original thoughts into a straightjacket of
conventions. There had to be a better way to teach writing.
For some years after this, I would present with my colleagues
at conferences, railing against the five-paragraph essay. We were often
preaching to the choir: fellow teachers who needed to hear affirmation
that paragraphs are less important than ideas, thesis statements
irrelevant without an argument, and topic sentences only one aspect of
cohesion. However, from time to time, a skeptical voice from the back
would ask, “If we don’t teach the five-paragraph essay, what should we
teach?” I now have an answer to that valid question: We should teach
genres. And that’s my thesis.
This article consolidates the ideas about genre in L2 writing
that I have presented recently at TESOL and elsewhere, along with
theories and research from the 2012 Genre Studies conference at Carleton
University in Ottawa, Canada, and the 2012 Conference on College
Composition and Communication (CCCC) in St. Louis, Missouri, USA.
Handouts from my presentations are available on my blog.1
The essential difference between traditional ESL and
genre-based writing pedagogies is that a genre approach requires far
greater attention to the context of writing. The five-paragraph essay
model with its predictable structure, neat connecting lines, and
suggested word counts per paragraph (Reid, 2000) is generic and decontextualized: it implies that
one model will fit all assignments. While this can be a useful tool,
especially in timed persuasive essays, the five-paragraph essay quickly
breaks down: What is the thesis for a narrative, and why would the
writer give away the message of the story at the end of the first
paragraph? Why does a procedural text need a thesis, given that thesis
means an argument (“only in this way shall you make the perfect egg
salad!”)? If a writer has two really good supporting ideas, does one
need to be split up to meet the tripartite structure? Or, as one student
nervously asked me, is it ever acceptable to write six
paragraphs?
By contrast, researchers in the various schools of genre
studies (Hyon, 1996) contend that communication can only occur within
genres because “we cannot not mean genres” (Martin, 2009). Genre
theories are sociocultural in origin: That is, they are concerned with
the role that writing (the action and the outcome) plays in different
cultural contexts (Martin & Rose, 2008). This week, for instance, I have written e-mails
to colleagues, friends, new acquaintances, and my director; messages on
discussion lists; TESOL conference proposals for three different session
types; data analyses and reports; a PowerPoint presentation; a textbook
chapter; Facebook status updates; blog comments; feedback on student
papers; and this article. Each task required me to choose an appropriate
form and medium, use different sets of conventions (including
paragraphing), select relevant information at an appropriate level of
detail, and adopt an effective register. To generalize across these
tasks would be futile. To apply a five-paragraph essay model would be
ineffective. To write them all in the same style would be catastrophic.
Context is everything.
The 2012 Carleton conference brought together researchers and
practitioners representing the three traditional schools of genre
studies, and many other related approaches. Rather than reconciling
differences, this had the effect of highlighting differences between the
various theories, which stimulated thought-provoking dialogue and often
fierce questioning after the plenary speeches. Although reconciling the
different approaches is beyond my scope and capacity, several common
themes emerged that can guide teachers of L2 writing.
First and foremost, there is no single written product that can
usefully be called “the essay.” There are many types of essay, and they
vary enormously across disciplines and even over time. Furthermore,
essays are not the only form of academic writing. Nesi and Gardner
(2012), for example, identified 13 “families” of genres in an extensive
review of undergraduate writing in British universities. In the
tradition of the systemic functional linguistics (SFL) orientation to
genre studies, they divide the “essay” family into its constituent
genres (cf. Rose & Martin, 2012):
challenge, commentary, consequential or factorial essay, discussion, and
exposition (argument). Each genre has its own staging and purpose, and
each is very different from other academic assignments, such as
literature reviews, critiques, and design proposals. At the graduate
level, Cooper and Bikowski (2007) found that only 7% of courses across
20 disciplines assigned “essays.” Even the most common assignment in
their study, the research paper, has been shown to be not a fixed genre
but a “loose” label that covers at least two quite different tasks
(Melzer, 2009; Samraj, 2004).
One reason for this variation is that genres emerge from and
are inextricably embedded in academic disciplines. Consequently, as
Elizabeth Wardle (2009) has argued, attempts to teach them outside their
native habitats risk devolving into mindless mimicry, genres whose
purpose is just “to write the genre.” The resulting “mutt genres” are
empty because they have been divorced of their social function: to
create and transmit knowledge between members of a disciplinary
discourse community (Wardle, 2009). This raises difficult questions for
ESL, and especially English for academic purposes (EAP), teachers. Is it
possible to teach the underlying skills of academic writing outside the
context of an actual content-area graduate or undergraduate class? Many
scholars in rhetorical genre studies would resist such generic genre
teaching (e.g., Miller, 1984), but others are more hopeful that genres
can be effectively taught in sheltered classes.
Exactly how to teach genres, and do so effectively, is an
ongoing debate. The SFL approach argues that all students need to expand
their linguistic repertoires in order to write in genres that will
recur and be recombined in different contexts (Rose & Martin,
2012). EAP, on the other hand, holds that ESL teachers can help students
investigate, understand, and learn the genres that meet the
communicative needs of their current or future fields of study (Feak
& Caplan, 2013). In addition to the grammatical patterns that
are typical of academic writing in most fields (Caplan, 2012c), students
can be taught the strategies that successful writers in their major or
discipline employ. More important, as Chris Feak demonstrated in our
TESOL workshop (Feak & Caplan, 2013), graduate students in
particular should be compiling their own minicorpora for each key genre
in their discipline and using the data to challenge, confirm, or extend
the advice in their textbooks and ESL classes. This is more fraught, but
not impossible, for undergraduate students, who may have to negotiate
genres across multiple disciplines. However, the need for students to
develop versatility and genre awareness (Johns, 1997) remains, even if
the full range of writing contexts cannot be predicted.
Both the EAP and SFL, therefore, eschew generic formulae on the
basis that “students should have clear guidelines for how to construct
the different kinds of texts they have to write” (Hyland, 2004).
Therefore, genres are taught through their typical organization, or staging, although the stages may be defined
differently. (Roughly, SFL looks for linguistic patterns, while EAP
examines the shifting communicative purposes in a text.) For instance,
Swales & Feak (2012) teach the typical structures of
general-specific, specific-general, and problem-solution texts, as well
as “sub-genres” such as data commentaries and research paper
introductions. In my contribution to the Carleton conference, I proposed
a genre structure of MBA case write-ups in the context of the business
school at my institution (Caplan, 2012b). These stages are not immutable
formulae that can be applied regardless of context, and they do not
necessarily correspond to paragraphs. They are functional in particular
social contexts in order to achieve specific communicative goals (Rose
& Martin, 2012). Furthermore, certain linguistic resources
(grammar and vocabulary) can be identified as characteristic of each
stage, so that genre and language can and should be taught and learned
together.
One of the most widely implemented genre-based writing
pedagogies is Rothery’s (1996) Teaching-Learning Cycle (TLC). The TLC is
a model for curriculum design that differs significantly from process
writing, as David Rose explained in his plenary address at Carleton:
Process writing starts with learners’ current stage of linguistic,
conceptual, and rhetorical development (brainstorm everything you know
now), which teachers then have to remediate through feedback and
successive drafts. The TLC, by contrast, starts with the target and then
supports learners’ development towards that goal; genre staging and
language are taught in the context of a “shared experience,” (Martin,
2009) and learners only write independently when they are ready to
succeed (Rose, 2012). Specifically, instruction begins with
“deconstruction” of multiple exemplars of the target genre in which
students, guided by the teacher, deduce the required and optional
staging of the genre, build “field” (content knowledge), and develop
pertinent grammar and vocabulary. Next, students work in groups or as a
class to write a new text in the same genre together, the teacher
recasting their sentences and modeling effective writing strategies
(“joint construction;” see Caplan, 2012a). Finally, they are prepared
for the independent writing stage and then another iteration of the
cycle. This text-based approach helps students understand the choices
writers make, the constraints genres impose, and the variation that
occurs between instances of the same genre.
The last step in Rothery’s (1996) original version of the TLC
was to compare the genre to others that are similar or different to the
one that has been taught in order to encourage students to build a
repertoire of genres. This raises one of the thorniest debates in the
genre community: Can we teach for (positive) genre transfer? The
underlying assumption behind the generic five-paragraph essay is that
the decontextualized skills it practices—rather than the surface form
itself—will unproblematically transfer to the real world, the university
classroom, or at least next assignment. In this way, the essay students
write comparing their best friend and their sibling will somehow enable
them to write an essay discussing the differences between Kant’s Theory
of Freedom and Hume’s (Nesi & Gardner, 2012, p. 100). This is
at best optimistic, as any teacher can attest who has asked a student,
“Didn’t you learn this last semester?” Even if such transfer were
possible and useful, Elizabeth Wardle observed at CCCC that her
undergraduate students treated each assignment as isolated and unlike
any other (cf. Wardle, 2009). That is, they could not see how to
transfer the writing skills that the five-paragraph essay purports to
teach (organization, cohesion, supporting ideas, etc.). In a fascinating
piece of research reported at Carleton and at CCCC, Amy Devitt and Anis
Bawarshi found that even when high-school students did transfer genres
that had been successful for them before—their “genre baggage” (Devitt,
2012)—they wrote ineffectively in their
university courses because college professors do not want to receive
five-paragraph essays (see also Reiff & Bawarshi, 2011). That
is, students had learned the formula so well that they were unwilling or
unable to recognize that new educational contexts required new
genres.
In conclusion, here is a partial answer to the question of what
we should teach if we break our unhealthy attachment to generic
writing. Writers need explicit instruction in (some of) the genres they
will encounter. They need tools for identifying and analyzing writing
tasks and assignments, understanding how they are similar to and
different from their prior genre knowledge. They need a broad linguistic
repertoire and the ability to make appropriate choices in the right
registers to instantiate their target genres. They need practice
constructing meaningful texts in authentic genres through content-based
instruction. And in place of formulae, restrictions, and the usual
commandments of good writing, they need to be shown George Orwell’s
(1946) final rule of writing: “Break any of these rules sooner than say
anything outright barbarous.”
Note
1 There is much more to be said about
the wide and growing field of genre studies. A more thorough introduction to and justification of
genre-based writing pedagogies can be found in resources such as Hyland
(2004), Hyon (1996), Rose & Martin (2012), Swales (1990), and
Swales & Feak (2012), among many others.
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Nigel A. Caplan is an assistant professor at the University of
Delaware English Language Institute located in Newark, Delaware in the
United States. His research interests include genre-based pedagogy,
collaborative writing, and support for matriculated ESL university
students. Nigel is also the author of several textbooks, including Grammar Choices for Graduate and Professional Writers (Michigan, 2012) and two levels in a genre-based writing
series, to be published in 2014. |