Weal, E. (2013). Writing in English: Step by
step. Palo Alto, CA: Tenaya Press. 182 pages,
paperback.
It can be challenging for writing instructors to find texts
to use with their lower level ESL students, particularly texts that
systematically take students through a variety of writing exercises and
build skills from the sentence level to the paragraph level. I can
recall searching for materials and writing prompts and resorting to
creating my own materials and modifying exercises from a variety of
other textbooks to use with students in a language school in Chinatown,
Manhattan, who had a very limited knowledge of English grammar and
vocabulary. I would have benefited from a text like Writing in
English: Step by Step, and, more important, my students would
have perhaps built a better foundation for their writing skills with
such a systematic approach.
Writing in English: Step by Step is divided
into 12 thematic chapters, ranging from “All About Me” (Chapter 1) to
“Writing About a Picture” (Chapter 5), to “The Vacation of my Dreams”
(Chapter 12). Each chapter includes an opening reading section, followed
by several lessons focusing on specific grammatical, mechanical, and
structural skills, and then an editing challenge. Students then have a
series of writing activities, which build skills for a culminating
larger writing assignment, and then an editing checklist at the end of
the chapter. Activities for each chapter include partner work titled
“Talk about it,” “Think about it,” and “Write about it,” followed by a
final individual activity titled “Practice.” In this way, the skill work
can be interactive and students have a chance to engage with one
another in the topic before writing about it.
Weal states at the start of the book that she wrote it geared
toward students whose writing looks like this: “It was a busy day at the
store. She was a talk on the phone. She not want buy candy for child”
(p. vii). Accordingly, the book begins with the basics, defining
letters, words, sentences, and paragraphs in Chapter 1, and moves
through mechanics and grammar points such as capital and small letters
(Chapter 2); identifying subjects and verbs and singular and plural
(Chapter 3); adverbs of frequency and time expressions and negative
sentences (Chapter 4); present continuous verbs, punctuation, and run-on
sentences (Chapter 5); subject pronouns, topic sentences, and
connectors like “and” and “or” (Chapter 6); adjectives, using details,
and connectors like “and” and “but” (Chapter 7); more adjectives and
adding sentence variety to paragraphs (Chapter 8); simple present,
present continuous, action versus nonaction verbs, comparatives, and
using “because” (Chapter 9); simple past, regular and irregular verbs,
negative past tense (Chapter 10); special events, using “ago” and
“last,” using “before,” “after,” and “when” (Chapter 11); and the future
tense (Chapter 12). This systematic set of grammar and sentence
structure items will help students go from writing a few words to
writing paragraphs over the course. There are also appendixes including
spelling rules and a list of irregular past tense verbs.
Although the book would not be helpful for students beyond a
beginner’s level of English, the exercises included under the thematic
units are a wonderful aide to teachers who are struggling to help lower
level students practice reading, writing, and the use of typical
phrases. Often, authentic texts and many textbooks are not at a basic
enough level for such students, and this book is geared toward grammar
practice and sentence structure work for students with a limited
knowledge of English. A bonus for teachers is that there is no separate
teacher’s guide needed, as the author has given instructions on the use
of the text and suggested additional activities in the
introduction.
Overall, Writing in English: Step by Step is
well organized and includes a variety of lessons and activities to help
beginning level students improve their grammar, vocabulary, and
sentence writing skills. This book is useful for teachers who need a
text that will be at the right level for students with lower levels of
English proficiency and limited prior exposure to writing in
English.
Rebekah Johnson, EdD, is an assistant professor at
LaGuardia Community College, in the City University of New York, where
she teaches academic ESL writing and courses in linguistics and
bilingual education. She received her doctoral degree in applied
linguistics from Columbia University Teachers College. Her research
interests include second language writing, literacy, teacher education,
discourse analysis, and sociolinguistics. |