Since feelings and emotions intrinsically pervade
conversations, the affective dimension of conferencing cannot be
ignored (Chen, 2005, p. 19).
One of the fundamental principles of my personal teaching
philosophy posits that teaching is not only a purely instructional
treatment, but also an interpersonal relationship. Some of us may
separate out teaching as a special (i.e., professional) activity, but in
fact it is a natural extension of social life where interpersonal
relationships play a crucial role. So both in my scholarly work and in
my pedagogical endeavors, I strive to understand the social nature of
teaching.
As a writing instructor, for example, I often wonder how my
feedback is perceived by students. I am keenly aware of the fact that
providing feedback on student performance inherently assumes evaluation,
correction, suggestions for improvement, and even criticism; in other
words, it includes face-threatening acts. These acts can certainly
become an obstacle to the development of positive relationships between
the teacher and student. Therefore, when I provide written feedback, I
pay particular attention to how I articulate my remarks and suggestions,
as I know that even the most delicately and tactfully formulated
written comments can easily be taken the wrong way and be destructive to
learner identity (Witt & Kerssen-Griep, 2011). I also try to
remind myself that my goal is not passing judgment on students’ papers,
but rather involving them into a collaborative process of
revision.
I began to think even more deeply about the influence of
one-on-one feedback sessions on teacher-student relationships when I
started teaching introductory composition courses at Purdue University
in 2012, where writing conferences were and are still part of the
programmatic curriculum. Though conferences can be an incredibly
effective way to respond to student writing, face-to-face feedback
encounters are by no means emotionally neutral (Witt &
Kerssen-Griep, 2011). Instead, they are potentially face-threatening and
events “with important identity implications for students” (Trees,
Kerssen-Griep, & Hess, 2009, p. 398). Thus, they can be harmful
to the cultivation of positive teacher-student relationships. Reflecting
on my conference interaction with my first-year composition students, I
have realized that, as teachers, we have power to impact our message byhow we convey it.
In the literature, writing conferences are sometimes presented
not only as purely instructional, but also as relationship-building
venues. Wilcox (1997), for example, believes that the role of a writing
teacher should not be purely instructional (text-oriented), but should
also be nurturing (student-oriented):
For a writing teacher, the role of nurturer is more important
than the role of instructor. Knowledge and ability in using the writing
process are of little value unless the writer is growing along with the
writing project and feels trust in his or her teacher. Thus, working
with people must be a priority over working with papers. (p.
509)
Writing conferences therefore can be seen as both an academic
and a relational venue, and conference interaction can be defined as “a
hybrid kind of conversation that is both curricular and interpersonal”
(Consalvo, 2011, p. 28). In this respect, the goal of writing
conferences can be both responding to student writing and developing
positive teacher-student relationships. Quite paradoxically, however,
the instructional aim of writing conferences may appear to be
contradictory to the achievement of its relational objective. Providing
feedback on student writing is the primary conference activity from an
institutional viewpoint, and from this perspective, the development of
positive teacher-student relationships may be impeded due to the nature
of feedback as an instructional phenomenon in which constructive
feedback plays an important role.
What is the potentially damaging influence of feedback on
teacher-student relationships? First, as a pedagogical practice,
providing feedback encompasses power relations. Furthermore, as stated
earlier, responding to student writing involves potentially
face-threatening acts. This can all negatively influence conference
atmosphere and even strain teacher-student relationships (Witt &
Kerssen-Griep, 2011). In addition, Chen (2005) aptly stated that
“feelings of being welcomed or rejected, encouraged or humiliated,
valued or threatened remain strong in learners long after the conference
is over” (p. 19). Therefore, writing instructors should pay particular
attention to how conferences are conducted, how feedback is given, and
how students may feel about this feedback.
So What Can Teacher Training Programs Do?
Taking these challenges into account, it is my hope that
writing teacher training programs will raise teachers’ awareness of the
relational nature of feedback and the important role of teachers’
interactional behavior in writing conferences, particularly in
face-threatening moments of interaction. It is true that teacher
education courses vary in length, content, and format; therefore, it is
virtually impossible to provide general recommendations that would suit
every program. Nevertheless, encouraging writing instructors to reflect
on their own conference practices is a feasible task.
One way to encourage instructors to reflect on their embodied
behavior is to ask them to video record (e.g., by using a camcorder, a
digital photo camera with the video-recording option, or a smartphone)
their interactions with students during writing conferences and keep
reflective journals on these interactions as part of their ongoing
professional development. Such reflective journals would not only help
teachers become better aware of the interactional resources they use to
respond to student written work during conferences, but they would also
help teachers find possible mismatches between what teachers think they
should do and what they actually do in real-life conference
interactions. Sample questions may include the following:
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Do I maintain eye contact with my students when interacting with them?
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How often do I smile when interacting with my students? Why?
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What kinds of voice intonation do I use when providing
feedback, especially critical feedback? What kinds of emotions do I
communicate through my voice?
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What kinds of emotions do I communicate through my facial expressions?
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What kind of stance do I express through my gestures?
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Does my overall embodied behavior project a pleasant attitude?
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Do I appear friendly and supportive or critical and disappointed?
As teachers, we probably tend not to reflect on the use of our
interactional embodied behavior, partly because it is deeply ingrained
in our daily interaction, and thus it is subtle and mundane.
Nevertheless, though teachers may intuitively perceive the importance of
expressing affiliation (both verbally and nonverbally) with students
when providing feedback during conferences, this may not reflect their
actual performance. Therefore, through video-recording their conference
interaction and writing honest reflections, teachers can align their
feedback behavior with their beliefs.
Conclusion
As social actors, we are highly sensitive to each other’s
interactional behavior, and teacher-student interaction is no exception.
Therefore, I hope we will embrace the relational dimension of writing
conference interaction and try to further develop our understanding of
conferences as a place where writing teachers and students can
coconstruct positive social interaction without deviating from the
instructional goals of the meeting. To this end, teacher awareness of
their interactional behavior is crucial, and video-recording of
conference interaction followed by reflections will help to raise this
awareness.
I do believe that during writing conferences, teachers can
sensitively use affiliative interactional resources (including their
talk and embodied behavior), thereby lessening the face-threatening
potential of their feedback and maintaining positive teacher-student
relationships. As Nguyen (2007) noted, the teacher can establish an
environment “where real learning tasks are done and real social relationships are built through the
authentic and natural employment of various interactional resources” (p.
299).
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Chen, J. S. W. (2005). Interactional influences on
writing conferences (Unpublished doctoral dissertation). Hong
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Consalvo, A. L. (2011). Writing conferences and
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Elena Shvidko is an assistant professor at Utah
State University. Her research interests include L2 writing, multimodal
interaction, and interpersonal aspects of language teaching. She is also
a TESOL blogger, focusing on L2 writing. Her work appears in Journal of Response to Writing, System, TESOL Journal, and TESOL’s
New Ways series. |