Norloff, C., & Renehan, A. (2017). University
success writing, transition level, with MyEnglishLab. Hoboken,
NJ: Pearson. 280 pages, paperback.
In the words of the publisher of the book entitled above, University Success is “a three-strand developmental
course designed for English language learners transitioning to
mainstream academic environments” (back cover). These three strands are
oral communication, reading, and writing. The focus of this review will
be on writing.
Similar to the first two books in the series, the writing book
consists of three main parts: Fundamental Writing Skills, Critical
Thinking Skills, and Extended Writing. Each part is divided into five
units, which correspond to five content areas and focus on different but
complementary writing skills. These content areas include sociology,
economics, biology, humanities, and environmental engineering. As such,
the book integrates content and rhetorical skills, and can, in full or
in part, be of help to programs that are of interdisciplinary nature or
to compositions classes with students with various academic backgrounds
and interests.
The organization in each unit of the first two parts of the
book follows roughly the same pattern with components broken up as
follows:
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Unit Profile, which outlines the content
of the unit and explicitly states the topic at hand, (e.g., biological
and computer viruses from the biology section and air pollution from the
environmental engineering section).
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Outcomes, which broadly lists all the
skills (i.e., research or language related) targeted in the
unit.
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Getting Started, which includes a few
questions designed to activate students’ prior knowledge and get them to
think about the main issue being discussed in relation to their
personal experiences.
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Fundamental Skill, which refers to the
main research/writing skill discussed in the unit (e.g., analyzing the
rhetorical context).
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Supporting Skills, which—divided into two
separate parts—functions to support and reinforce the preceding section
(e.g., in relation to analyzing the rhetorical context: making stylistic
choices and controlling voice and tone).
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Reading-Writing Connection, which teaches a
point that shows the interconnected nature of these two skills (e.g.,
assembling an annotated bibliography).
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Language Skills, which highlights
appropriate use in academic writing (e.g., using reported speech).
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Apply Your Skills, which gives students
the opportunity to apply what they have learned in the unit through
individual, pair, and group work.
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Assignment and Beyond
Assignment sections, both of which include prompts that are
separate but related and can be adopted by course instructors.
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Unit Skills Summary, which briefly reiterates the skills completed in the unit.
Because the second part of the book is where it moves from
theoretical coverage to a more concrete level, the “Fundamental Skill”
in the first part is replaced with “Critical Thinking Skill” here and
includes, among other topics, “Distinguishing Facts and Opinions” and
“Reading Critically.”
The reader need not be overwhelmed by this outline because,
other than the contents page at the beginning of the book, the front
matter includes a “Key Features” page, meant to be used as a guide to
explain what each (sub)section entails, and a comprehensive “Scope and
Sequence” page summarizing all the skills targeted by each section in
each unit. Other features not mentioned include a “Why it’s Useful”
section, which comes after the skills sections outlined above and is
meant to explain the relevance and the importance of the skills under
discussion. Additionally, depending on the particular research skill,
the reader will be pleased with occasional tips in the margins of some
pages; cross-references to other parts of the book; and “culture notes,”
shedding light on cultural information, which are amusing. The
recurring activities and exercises that are helpful in getting the
students to collaborate in pair or group work include a “Before You
Write” prompt with a list of discussion questions to initiate a
conversation and a “Peer Review” prompt with a list of items to direct
the task and make it more effective. Finally, the book includes an
online support that gives students more opportunities for further
practice and self-teach training, and, as such, comes with an access
code to the accompanying website. References to online material are
spread in several places in each unit. While the electronic material can
be done away with in the first two parts, this is not the case in the
third part. This is because each unit in the third part barely includes
six pages in total, about half of which centers around an interview with
an expert in each of the five subject matters, and these interviews are
only available online.
The only remaining question concerns the order in which the
five areas of study are arranged, because there was no explanation
given. A more logical progression would either take a historical
approach to these academic fields (i.e., starting with humanities,
natural sciences, and then social sciences) or would establish a
relational link between them (i.e., starting with humanities, social
sciences, and then natural sciences). Nonetheless, the book does a
decent job of choosing material that is both informative and engaging
and pointing out important differences in writing conventions across
academic disciplines. Furthermore, it includes helpful visual
representations to elaborate on certain points and an accessible writing
style that makes a smooth introduction to how writing is done in the
respective field. Students reading this book will encounter a number of
important skills that are essential to the interrelated processes of
reading, research writing, and revision.
University Success promotes itself as
gearing toward a student population that is in the transitional phase
between ESL and mainstream classes, and it can possibly apply equally
well to the latter population in a first-year English composition class,
for instance. Given that in my own composition classes I have students
intending to major in two of the five fields included in this book
(economics and biology), I can easily see myself assigning this book the
next time I am going to teach.
Ahmad A. Alharthi is a doctoral student in English
language and rhetoric, and a composition instructor in the Expository
Writing Program at the University of Washington. His research interests
include discourse analysis, second language writing, and World
Englishes. |